The writer comments initially on the dispersion of shares and stakes. The sub-section, "Stock Market Updates", sees the writer give a comprehensive analysis of the current situation of the shares market. He compares the change in percentages between different companies.

He also provides his personal tips and opinions on when to buy and sell shares. The next sub-section, "Entrepreneurship and Startups", analyses the increase in global interconnectivity and how that has created a growth of global trade. The writer next talks about how the recent improvement in technology has led to an increase in the number of people who are able to start their own businesses.

Finally, he moves on to "Economic Policies". In this sub-section, the writer begins by talking about the struggle that modern politicians face when trying to form and instil a successful economic policy. The writer provides a well-structured piece of opinion and analysis across each of the sub-sections. This shows strong evidence of logical and clear subject knowledge as well as the succession of ideas in a way that is satisfactory for the reader.

Also, there are great evidences of personal research and wide technology advancement, which is greatly received in an A Level piece of academic work.